After reviewing our idea and taking on board the feedback we received, we decided to adapt our film because of our numerous dilemmas. In the audience feedback session, people were concerned about our opening sequence fitting into the time frame of 02.30 minutes. Therefore we have cut out numerous aspects, in order to not only fit into the time frame, but also this allows for a more realistic storyline, which was another major concern in the audience feedback session. Whilst we felt it was necessary to adapt our idea, the broad feedback we received was positive and therefore we decided to keep the majority of our initial idea.
A brief over view of what our new story line would look like:
A brief over view of what our new story line would look like:
1) Establishing shot of curtains flying in to the house (implies house has been broken in to)
2) Camera tilts down one story to the lounge where blonde girl is watching tv (alone)
3) Girl gets a text from mother to say they'd be home late and not to lock up
4) Phone rings, girl answers, no reply
5) Phone rings a second time, girl answers, no reply
6) Starts to get nervous
7) Hears noises from up stairs
8) Goes to have a look up stairs
9) Shots of murderer and girls feet walking
10) Hear bath tap running
11) Enters bathroom
12) Shot of hand pushing girls head under the water
13 Shot of her lying dead in the blood bath
2) Camera tilts down one story to the lounge where blonde girl is watching tv (alone)
3) Girl gets a text from mother to say they'd be home late and not to lock up
4) Phone rings, girl answers, no reply
5) Phone rings a second time, girl answers, no reply
6) Starts to get nervous
7) Hears noises from up stairs
8) Goes to have a look up stairs
9) Shots of murderer and girls feet walking
10) Hear bath tap running
11) Enters bathroom
12) Shot of hand pushing girls head under the water
13 Shot of her lying dead in the blood bath
14) '666' written in blood on the window/mirror
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