AUDIENCE FEEBACK OF OUR IDEA

We presented our idea to our class to gather feedback and constructive criticism as to how we can improve  the opening sequence of our film, called '666' 

Here is the feedback we received:

The fundamental point that we gathered from our audience was that there was simply too much to fit in to a 2 minutes opening sequence, whilst being able to achieve a good and understandable sequence. Nonetheless, this feedback was varied as some classmates said that we were more than capable of fitting all of the action in to two minutes. After debating this constructive criticism we decided to remove the police call from the sequence as not only do we lack time to include everything we originally decided on, but we also realised that it was  unrealistic for someone to call the police after only two phone calls. Furthermore it came about, after dictating our idea that our film too closely mirrored Scream, and that whilst we got inspiration from the film, we need to be cautious of making it too similar, as then it moves away from being an original idea and simply mimics an already published film. The response we got in regards to our name, 999, was generally positive as it puts a spin on the idea however we concluded that 666 would be of better fitting to our newly adapted idea, without the police phone call. We also need to incorporate credits to our film, and depending on how we choose to present them, adapt our film to ensure there is time for everything. When asked they would watch our film, our response was 100% yes, especially if there is an attractive girl in it. Finally we concluded that not everything we had originally decided to incorporate was actually necessary, so after pondering this thought we decided to remove the kettle shot as it is simply unnecessary, and too closely mimics Scream.