We
presented our idea to our class to gather feedback and constructive criticism
as to how we can improve the opening sequence of our film, called '666'
Here
is the feedback we received:
The fundamental point
that we gathered from our audience was that there was simply too much to
fit in to a 2 minutes opening sequence, whilst being able to achieve a good and understandable
sequence. Nonetheless, this feedback was varied as some classmates said that we were more
than capable of fitting all of the action in to two minutes. After debating
this constructive criticism we decided to remove the police call from the
sequence as not only do we lack time to include everything
we originally decided on, but we also realised that it was unrealistic for someone to call the police after only two phone
calls. Furthermore it came about, after dictating our idea that
our film too closely mirrored Scream, and that whilst we got
inspiration from the film, we need to be cautious of making it too
similar, as then it moves away from being an original idea and simply
mimics an already published film. The response we got in regards to our name,
999, was generally positive as it puts a spin on the idea however we concluded
that 666 would be of better fitting to our newly adapted idea, without the
police phone call. We also need to incorporate credits to our film,
and depending on how we choose to present them, adapt our film to ensure there
is time for everything. When asked they would watch our film, our response was
100% yes, especially if there is an attractive girl in it. Finally we concluded
that not everything we had originally decided
to incorporate was actually necessary, so after pondering this
thought we decided to remove the kettle shot as it is
simply unnecessary, and too closely mimics Scream.